Turn To Be A New Woman

Swing with kimonos.

BY JASON HUANG

As soon as you get to “Kyotobashi”, you will see many sets of kimono at the first sight. We all understand kimono is Japanese traditional costume. In Kyotobashi, you can see many colorful kimonos; meanwhile you can buy kimono or even get a free one. Here it provides the fitting room for women as well. You can change the kimono immediately once get a new one. Wearing a kimono is a dream of women in some countries. However, you may not only fulfill your dream but also earn money by dancing like the geisha.

Besides, the scenery is also full of Japanese characteristics. The houses are all Tatami houses, and there are some artificial scenes as well. You will experience a feeling totally different from places where you idle in SL. Also, the music let me feel the atmosphere of Kyoto. If you get here, there would be no need to travel abroad, and then you could undergo the exotic culture.

Here, you can make your kimono dream come true, by dancing like a geisha to earn money. In conclusion, Kyotobashi not only help you earn more money but also help you experience the beauty of classical city Kyoto.

The Discussion of Alan's News

[2:24] Nada Copperfield: go
[2:24] Nada Copperfield: first
[2:24] Nada Copperfield: i would like to aks
[2:24] Nada Copperfield: what is
[2:25] Nada Copperfield: url please
[2:25] karikan Kytori: then i'm both story teller and organiser
[2:25] karikan Kytori: http://britbiscuits.blogspot.com/
[2:25] Nada Copperfield: 0L$
[2:25] Nada Copperfield: what is this?????
[2:25] karikan Kytori: my story is about the freebie warehouse down that stairs
[2:26] Cloud Clarity: so shall we go down?
[2:27] karikan Kytori: no
[2:27] karikan Kytori: too many ppl down there
[2:28] karikan Kytori: 0L$ is the name of the place
[2:28] karikan Kytori: when u go down
[2:28] Nada Copperfield: ooooh
[2:28] karikan Kytori: u could see that on the screen
[2:28] Nada Copperfield: , he/she---------> s/he
[2:28] Nada Copperfield: hahah
[2:29] karikan Kytori: many ppl come here coz most of the things are free
[2:29] karikan Kytori: and there r many things down there'
[2:29] karikan Kytori: the entrance to this place is where we r now
[2:29] Jackowacko Juliesse is Offline
[2:30] karikan Kytori: "subway"
[2:30] karikan Kytori: but there's no subway
[2:30] karikan Kytori: so i mention it in 1st para
[2:30] karikan Kytori: then i tried to elaborate the word "dungeon"
[2:31] karikan Kytori: then emphasise the "free" feature of this place at the end
[2:31] Jackowacko Juliesse is Online
[2:31] karikan Kytori: fin
[2:31] Nada Copperfield: goooood one again
[2:31] karikan Kytori: = =
[2:31] Nada Copperfield: only a tiny suggestion
[2:31] karikan Kytori: ok
[2:32] Nada Copperfield: i had mentioned above
[2:32] Nada Copperfield: you can go and chcke
[2:32] karikan Kytori: ha ha''ok
[2:33] karikan Kytori: more opinions?
[2:34] Cloud Clarity: ＝ ＝
[2:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2:34] Cloud Clarity: good
[2:34] Jackowacko Juliesse: nope
[2:34] Nada Copperfield: mmmmmmmmm
[2:35] Nada Copperfield: i thin
[2:35] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2:35] Nada Copperfield: omg i can think>?????
[2:35] Cloud Clarity: perhapshs
[2:35] Cloud Clarity: the last parar
[2:35] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2:35] Cloud Clarity: is too shooort
[2:35] Nada Copperfield: i mean
[2:35] Cloud Clarity: i mean comapre with the first and the second
[2:35] Cloud Clarity: i find the the last one tis wheree u talk about the itemsd in it
[2:36] karikan Kytori: really? i think they r the same length
[2:36] Nada Copperfield: when i see your last sentnece in first paragrpah, iwas wondering....you might show us how popularity it is .............
[2:37] Cloud Clarity: nono i mean comparing the lengeth of 1st plus 2ed para
[2:37] Cloud Clarity: the third is about the content the place u want to introduce
[2:37] karikan Kytori: u mean i should emphasise more on the place?
[2:37] Cloud Clarity: but ugive not enough description
[2:38] Cloud Clarity: sort of
[2:38] karikan Kytori: there r just many stuff
[2:38] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2:38] karikan Kytori: nothing really important
[2:38] Nada Copperfield: who are you answering to?????
[2:38] karikan Kytori: all
[2:38] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2:38] Nada Copperfield: oh welll
[2:39] karikan Kytori: how popular
[2:39] karikan Kytori: let me think
[2:39] karikan Kytori: just many ppl
[2:39] karikan Kytori: or how else could i describe it?
[2:39] karikan Kytori: h aha
[2:40] Cloud Clarity: Lavishness is allowed here.
[2:40] Cloud Clarity: i don't seee Lavishness actuallly
[2:40] Nada Copperfield: alright
[2:40] karikan Kytori: ok
[2:40] karikan Kytori: i mean u could take and dispose anything u get here
[2:40] karikan Kytori: if u do not like
[2:40] karikan Kytori: just throw it
[2:40] karikan Kytori: coz it's free
[2:41] Cloud Clarity: i know that but it's not claer in ur story
[2:41] karikan Kytori: ok
[2:41] karikan Kytori: i'll do revision on that
[2:41] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2:41] Cloud Clarity: any more opion?
[2:41] Cloud Clarity: if no ............
[2:41] karikan Kytori: then dismiss

Alan’s news reports the “Subway, 161 Street Station, Yankee Stadium” however, you might think it as the subway station. It did not relate to the subway station actually. The entrance leads us down into no station but the dungeon. The dungeon has the connotation of darkness and undesirable. But everyone here want to be trapped because of 0$L. There are so many boards hanging on the wall and boxes stacked under.

Here declared the free item gratis and it is also the most appealing feature. Anything you could think would get here, even more some special gadgets. More importantly, most of them are free. You could just choose the best looks on you.

The news did not have any big grammatical error, Cloud suggest Alan can more elaborate the last paragraph. As result of comparing with the first and the second, the last paragraph is too short. And the sentence” Lavishness is allowed here.”is not clear at all. Maybe Alan could explain more deeply and clearly.

Here Is Only for Women.

Swing with the kimono.

BY Jason Huang

“Kyotobashi” As soon as you get here, you will see many sets of kimono at the first sight. We all understand the kimono is Japan’s traditional costume. In Kyotobashi, you can see many colorful kimonos, meanwhile you also can buy the kimono or even get the free one. Meanwhile, it also provides the fitting room for women. You could change the kimono immediately when get the new one. However, here is not only for women to fulfill the dream of wearing the traditional costume, but also help you earn Lindens.

After you dress the selected kimono, you must want to know how it looks. Therefore, you could dance for a certain time in order to earn Lindens. Under the circumstance, it seems that you are the geisha in SL.

The scenery is also full of Japanese characteristics. The house is all Tatami houses, and there are some manufactured scenes as well. You will experience a whole different feeling from the places where you idle in SL. Besides, the music let me feel the atmosphere of Kyoto. If you got here, there would be no need to travel abroad, and then you could undergo the exotic culture.

Kyotobashi really provides the good chance to earn Lindens; moreover, it is equipped with the different culture where you live now.

What Are They Talking about?!

There Are Three Cantonese Chatting in China Town

BY JASON HUANG

I met three special Cantonese when I was in China Town.

I searched “China town”, get teleported to that. I met three people there; meanwhile, it is full of Chinese specialties. For example, go, tea, temple, the stone lion and etc. Every object I saw is all coming from Chinese culture. Here seems like the china town in USA. But there were few people there. Maybe it is because of the time. I logged in 2:00 a.m.; I met only three people there, too. They were chatting with each other. However, I did not interrupt their conversation. I was only standing aside and observing what were they talking about. It revealed that they came from Hong Kong because they used some Chinese characters such as咁 or 係.

Claven said he like scrutinizing the people in SL, and also analyzing what he discovered. Besides, Claven pointed out what is the difference between SL and the RL. But Claven said in Cantonese, I could not understand what it means totally. Next, the man called Knife was a bit of an eccentric. He said he is the justice; he wanted to clear the stigma in SL, chastising every sinner. Although I just stand there it was still bizarre for me about what “Knife” said. Moreover, the other one praised the “knife” all the time. All of them are really interesting and I also curious of what they said.

I did not really know did they know each other before. Nevertheless, this is the most special conversation since I took part in second life.

Be the organizer of Dana's SL news

[2009/04/15 1:52] Nada Copperfield: okya
[2009/04/15 1:52] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/04/15 1:52] Nada Copperfield: my story is about SL mentor
[2009/04/15 1:53] Nada Copperfield: and first i am tlaking that i actually do not care about my appearance (i mean my avatar
[2009/04/15 1:53] Nada Copperfield: all i wnat to do is get out of here
[2009/04/15 1:53] Nada Copperfield: but the point is
[2009/04/15 1:53] Nada Copperfield: dunno how
[2009/04/15 1:53] Nada Copperfield: when i am so helpless in this goddam help island
[2009/04/15 1:53] Nada Copperfield: a beautiful lady come here
[2009/04/15 1:54] Nada Copperfield: she is the sl mentor
[2009/04/15 1:54] Nada Copperfield: i ask her to help me out of here
[2009/04/15 1:54] Nada Copperfield: but she taught me a lot of other things
[2009/04/15 1:55] Nada Copperfield: like clothes stuff
[2009/04/15 1:58] karikan Kytori: a second plz
[2009/04/15 1:58] karikan Kytori: let me read ur blog posting first
[2009/04/15 1:58] Nada Copperfield: http://danahuangnews.blogspot.com/
[2009/04/15 1:59] karikan Kytori: u do not have her pics?
[2009/04/15 1:59] karikan Kytori: coz u do not know how to snapshot then?
[2009/04/15 1:59] karikan Kytori: right?
[2009/04/15 1:59] karikan Kytori: i think ur story is about a person
[2009/04/15 2:00] Cloud Clarity: NO
[2009/04/15 2:00] Cloud Clarity: I DON'T
[2009/04/15 2:00] karikan Kytori: so it's better to have a pic of her
[2009/04/15 2:00] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/04/15 2:00] Cloud Clarity: YES
[2009/04/15 2:00] karikan Kytori: then it's fine
[2009/04/15 2:00] Cloud Clarity: I FORGET TO TAKE HER PICTURE
[2009/04/15 2:00] Cloud Clarity: SHE IS A MESTERIOUS LADY
[2009/04/15 2:00] Cloud Clarity: come and go
[2009/04/15 2:01] Cloud Clarity: btw
[2009/04/15 2:01] Cloud Clarity: i am DANA
[2009/04/15 2:01] Cloud Clarity: Olivia is using my computer
[2009/04/15 2:01] karikan Kytori: what?
[2009/04/15 2:01] karikan Kytori: so u wanna make the organiser suffer?
[2009/04/15 2:01] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/04/15 2:01] Cloud Clarity: no
[2009/04/15 2:01] Cloud Clarity: it's okay
[2009/04/15 2:01] Cloud Clarity: just let it be
[2009/04/15 2:01] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2009/04/15 2:01] Nada Copperfield: okya
[2009/04/15 2:01] Nada Copperfield: i am back
[2009/04/15 2:01] Nada Copperfield: i am DANA now
[2009/04/15 2:02] karikan Kytori: or do u have ur ugly past pics?
[2009/04/15 2:02] Cloud Clarity: i'm back
[2009/04/15 2:02] Nada Copperfield: lol
[2009/04/15 2:02] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/04/15 2:02] Cloud Clarity: it's Olivia
[2009/04/15 2:02] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/04/15 2:02] karikan Kytori: coz i think ur pics have nothing to do with ur story
[2009/04/15 2:02] Nada Copperfield: gosh
[2009/04/15 2:02] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/04/15 2:02] Cloud Clarity: i LOVE UR STORY
[2009/04/15 2:02] Cloud Clarity: SINCERELY
[2009/04/15 2:02] Nada Copperfield: but i forget to take a picture that time
[2009/04/15 2:02] Jackowacko Juliesse: excellent
[2009/04/15 2:03] Cloud Clarity: u can take a pic by using the Gramar girl avata
[2009/04/15 2:03] Nada Copperfield: so should take all my clothes off?
[2009/04/15 2:03] Cloud Clarity: yes lol
[2009/04/15 2:03] Nada Copperfield: then put on the ugly clothes?
[2009/04/15 2:03] Cloud Clarity: and bold and one shoes
[2009/04/15 2:03] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/04/15 2:03] Cloud Clarity: if u have time~ i mean~ to make an attraction
[2009/04/15 2:04] Nada Copperfield: alright
[2009/04/15 2:04] Nada Copperfield: i will try
[2009/04/15 2:04] Cloud Clarity: i really like ur story~ and the headlie
[2009/04/15 2:04] karikan Kytori: btw, if u wanna write dialogue in ur story
[2009/04/15 2:04] karikan Kytori: make the speaker more clearly
[2009/04/15 2:04] Cloud Clarity: ohohoh
[2009/04/15 2:04] karikan Kytori: coz in some cases, i dunno who's speaking
[2009/04/15 2:04] karikan Kytori: u jumped too fast
[2009/04/15 2:05] Nada Copperfield: such as>
[2009/04/15 2:06] karikan Kytori: nono, sorry
[2009/04/15 2:06] karikan Kytori: i read ur story again
[2009/04/15 2:06] karikan Kytori: and found that it's not the speaker-problem
[2009/04/15 2:06] Cloud Clarity: subtitle~ a little suggestion~ perhpas u can ignore me: The beautiful lady who inspires me sort of i mean u can ignore~ just a suggestion
[2009/04/15 2:07] karikan Kytori: coz in some cases, u use " "in ur mental talk
[2009/04/15 2:07] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/15 2:07] karikan Kytori: so i got confused
[2009/04/15 2:07] karikan Kytori: sorry
[2009/04/15 2:07] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/15 2:07] Nada Copperfield: it's fine
[2009/04/15 2:07] Cloud Clarity: just feel that ur subtitle a little bit too long~ but if u think its ok, that will be ok of course
[2009/04/15 2:07] karikan Kytori: and don't forget ur grammatical errors
[2009/04/15 2:08] Nada Copperfield: ?
[2009/04/15 2:08] Nada Copperfield: in the essay>
[2009/04/15 2:08] karikan Kytori: for example, in ur headline
[2009/04/15 2:08] karikan Kytori: all i want is to....
[2009/04/15 2:09] Cloud Clarity: oh yes~
[2009/04/15 2:09] karikan Kytori: and in the last sentence
[2009/04/15 2:09] karikan Kytori: it is she.....
[2009/04/15 2:09] karikan Kytori: not it is her
[2009/04/15 2:09] karikan Kytori: just minor errors
[2009/04/15 2:09] Nada Copperfield: oops
[2009/04/15 2:09] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/15 2:09] Nada Copperfield: found that
[2009/04/15 2:10] karikan Kytori: and in para 2 last sentence
[2009/04/15 2:10] karikan Kytori: my avatar alive?
[2009/04/15 2:10] karikan Kytori: is alive?
[2009/04/15 2:10] Nada Copperfield: yep
[2009/04/15 2:10] Nada Copperfield: is alive
[2009/04/15 2:10] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/15 2:11] karikan Kytori: other opinions?
[2009/04/15 2:11] Cloud Clarity: she keep help with my appearence
[2009/04/15 2:11] Cloud Clarity: alan
[2009/04/15 2:11] karikan Kytori: what?
[2009/04/15 2:12] Cloud Clarity: does it need to add help me with
[2009/04/15 2:12] Cloud Clarity: or help with is ok
[2009/04/15 2:12] Cloud Clarity: ?
[2009/04/15 2:12] Cloud Clarity: just ask for sure
[2009/04/15 2:12] karikan Kytori: "me" would be clearer
[2009/04/15 2:13] karikan Kytori: i'm wondering whether u could make the lady appear in ur first para
[2009/04/15 2:13] karikan Kytori: coz it's kind of late to appear in the second para
[2009/04/15 2:14] karikan Kytori: since ur topic is about the lady
[2009/04/15 2:14] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/15 2:14] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/04/15 2:14] Nada Copperfield: wait
[2009/04/15 2:14] karikan Kytori: why not make her appear forst
[2009/04/15 2:14] karikan Kytori: yes?
[2009/04/15 2:15] Cloud Clarity: the headline, i f u don't want to change, perhaps it's good to put "..." after the sentence, cuz i find the sentence not ending in ur tone...
[2009/04/15 2:15] Nada Copperfield: could you .......
[2009/04/15 2:15] Nada Copperfield: give me suggestion or how
[2009/04/15 2:15] karikan Kytori: who? the princess?
[2009/04/15 2:16] Cloud Clarity: u
[2009/04/15 2:16] Cloud Clarity: of course
[2009/04/15 2:16] Cloud Clarity: lol
[2009/04/15 2:16] Cloud Clarity: get out of "an" island
[2009/04/15 2:16] karikan Kytori: just "the" island
[2009/04/15 2:16] Cloud Clarity: perhaps it could be get out of "the" island
[2009/04/15 2:16] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/04/15 2:17] Cloud Clarity: common give her suggestion about the first para
[2009/04/15 2:17] Nada Copperfield: so i should delete some sentences in first paragraph>
[2009/04/15 2:17] Nada Copperfield: in order to let her come into the first paragraph?
[2009/04/15 2:17] karikan Kytori: no, just do some moving work
[2009/04/15 2:17] karikan Kytori: like a lady come to me when i'm lost
[2009/04/15 2:17] karikan Kytori: that kind
[2009/04/15 2:18] Nada Copperfield: okay'
[2009/04/15 2:18] karikan Kytori: tell ur reader first that u met her
[2009/04/15 2:18] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/04/15 2:18] Nada Copperfield: i see
[2009/04/15 2:18] karikan Kytori: then talked about what u have in first para now
[2009/04/15 2:18] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/04/15 2:18] karikan Kytori: does the reviewer have any suggestion?
[2009/04/15 2:19] Nada Copperfield: and where is Jason actually?
[2009/04/15 2:19] karikan Kytori: away again
[2009/04/15 2:19] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/04/15 2:19] Cloud Clarity: oh~~~~
[2009/04/15 2:20] karikan Kytori: jason san~~~~~~~~~
[2009/04/15 2:20] karikan Kytori: come back
[2009/04/15 2:20] Jackowacko Juliesse: haha
[2009/04/15 2:20] Jackowacko Juliesse: i m here never away
[2009/04/15 2:20] Nada Copperfield: ?
[2009/04/15 2:21] Cloud Clarity: can i leave 4 a while within 5 min
[2009/04/15 2:21] karikan Kytori: do u have any suggestion for nada?
[2009/04/15 2:21] Cloud Clarity: wrb
[2009/04/15 2:21] Cloud Clarity: wait~~~~plz~~~~~~~~`
[2009/04/15 2:21] Nada Copperfield: jason~~~~~~~~
[2009/04/15 2:21] Quartet Bong: Marihuana B o o s t !
[2009/04/15 2:21] Nada Copperfield: you should focus on me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[2009/04/15 2:21] Nada Copperfield: not on your girfriend
[2009/04/15 2:21] Nada Copperfield: bitte
[2009/04/15 2:22] karikan Kytori: nada is angry now
[2009/04/15 2:22] karikan Kytori: be careful
[2009/04/15 2:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: i have no girlfriend
[2009/04/15 2:22] Nada Copperfield: hey
[2009/04/15 2:22] Nada Copperfield: jacko
[2009/04/15 2:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: i really cannot find the mistake in ur article
[2009/04/15 2:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes?
[2009/04/15 2:23] Nada Copperfield: nothing
[2009/04/15 2:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2009/04/15 2:23] Nada Copperfield: just call you to come BACK
[2009/04/15 2:24] Nada Copperfield: so.... what is going now?
[2009/04/15 2:24] Nada Copperfield: wait for the princess whose computer is worse than mine
[2009/04/15 2:24] Jackowacko Juliesse: finish
[2009/04/15 2:24] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/04/15 2:24] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/04/15 2:25] karikan Kytori: take a group pic first
[2009/04/15 2:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: you should post the pic
[2009/04/15 2:25] Nada Copperfield: yeo
[2009/04/15 2:25] Nada Copperfield: yep
[2009/04/15 2:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: and revise the grammatical mistake
[2009/04/15 2:26] Nada Copperfield: again
[2009/04/15 2:26] Nada Copperfield: please
[2009/04/15 2:26] Quartet Bong: Marihuana B o o s t !
[2009/04/15 2:26] karikan Kytori: we've said that before
[2009/04/15 2:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: u can see the transcript
[2009/04/15 2:26] karikan Kytori: nada is sad coz u do not pay attention on her
[2009/04/15 2:26] Nada Copperfield: you are not focus
[2009/04/15 2:26] Nada Copperfield: jasobn........
[2009/04/15 2:26] Nada Copperfield: that is right
[2009/04/15 2:26] Nada Copperfield: maybe we can take a pictrue that everybody is taking the smoke
[2009/04/15 2:27] Jackowacko Juliesse: haha
[2009/04/15 2:27] Jackowacko Juliesse: i am focus on u
[2009/04/15 2:27] Quartet Bong: Marihuana B o o s t !
[2009/04/15 2:27] Jackowacko Juliesse: na
[2009/04/15 2:28] Nada Copperfield: great
[2009/04/15 2:29] Quartet Bong: Marihuana B o o s t !
[2009/04/15 2:29] Nada Copperfield: sit and take the pic
[2009/04/15 2:29] Nada Copperfield: olivia
[2009/04/15 2:30] karikan Kytori: princess is back?
[2009/04/15 2:31] Cloud Clarity: i am back
[2009/04/15 2:31] Cloud Clarity: but
[2009/04/15 2:31] Cloud Clarity: the first is should be "was"
[2009/04/15 2:32] karikan Kytori: where r we talking about now?
[2009/04/15 2:33] Cloud Clarity: and does she need to a a comma to " i say to my roomates at least .......
[2009/04/15 2:33] Cloud Clarity: in the first sentence
[2009/04/15 2:33] Cloud Clarity: should the verb should be present tense
[2009/04/15 2:33] Jackowacko Juliesse: i think dana can modify the mistake by herself
[2009/04/15 2:34] Cloud Clarity: lol
[2009/04/15 2:34] Cloud Clarity: lol
[2009/04/15 2:34] Cloud Clarity: yes
[2009/04/15 2:34] Cloud Clarity: i agree
[2009/04/15 2:34] Cloud Clarity: but the question is should the verb over all be the present tense or some should be past tense
[2009/04/15 2:35] Quartet Bong: Marihuana B o o s t !
[2009/04/15 2:36] Nada Copperfield: so?
[2009/04/15 2:36] Nada Copperfield: what is the problem now?
[2009/04/15 2:36] Nada Copperfield: lol
[2009/04/15 2:36] Cloud Clarity: so~~
[2009/04/15 2:36] Jackowacko Juliesse: modify the grammatical mistake
[2009/04/15 2:36] Cloud Clarity: i find that her verb tense are not the same in the article
[2009/04/15 2:36] Jackowacko Juliesse: and put on the pic
[2009/04/15 2:37] Jackowacko Juliesse: finish?
[2009/04/15 2:37] Cloud Clarity: so should she revise all here story in present tense?
[2009/04/15 2:37] Cloud Clarity: or in past tense?
[2009/04/15 2:37] karikan Kytori: past tense i think
[2009/04/15 2:37] Cloud Clarity: if u take a look, u may find that the tenses in the artile is not coherent
[2009/04/15 2:37] Jackowacko Juliesse: in past tense i think
[2009/04/15 2:38] karikan Kytori: but dialogue should remain present tense
[2009/04/15 2:38] Nada Copperfield: k
[2009/04/15 2:38] Cloud Clarity: k
[2009/04/15 2:39] Cloud Clarity: done? or any other advice?
[2009/04/15 2:39] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/04/15 2:39] karikan Kytori: hey, organiser. give some orders
[2009/04/15 2:39] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/04/15 2:39] karikan Kytori: no suggestion from me
[2009/04/15 2:39] Jackowacko Juliesse: finish??
[2009/04/15 2:39] Nada Copperfield: organizer!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[2009/04/15 2:40] Jackowacko Juliesse: i have no suggestion
[2009/04/15 2:40] Jackowacko Juliesse: = =
[2009/04/15 2:40] Cloud Clarity: ok done
[2009/04/15 2:40] Cloud Clarity: who's next?
[2009/04/15 2:40] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/04/15 2:40] Cloud Clarity: me as a writer?
[2009/04/15 2:40] karikan Kytori: we r going to finish all now?
[2009/04/15 2:40] Cloud Clarity: dunno
[2009/04/15 2:41] Cloud Clarity: what do u guys think?
[2009/04/15 2:41] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/04/15 2:41] Jackowacko Juliesse: go on
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The whole story is pretty good, and it also can give newbie the way to experience the Second Life. The story is about Dana met the mentor in SL, the mentor is nice to her, giving her some clothes to dress up. After dressing these beautiful clothes, Dana became a whole new avatar. The new life is just beginning from now. But we suggest she modify the grammatical errors. Meanwhile, she should post the picture which when she was newbie on the blog. And the picture which she posted did not have any relation with the news. Actually, the SL news does not have the big mistake; she only needs to correct the tiny grammatical error.