(Revised) What in the Puff?!

The softness in the Puff, you cannot miss it!!

‘Ice cream in the puff?’ Can you imagine the stuff in the puff? In the ancient city Tainan, there is innovative dessert you might have never seen in Taiwan. Eva Puff, at the beginning, it located near NCKU and it was popular with the students and the inhabitants. Two years ago, Eva Puff moved to Tainan Girls’ Senior High School, nevertheless, it did not affect its popularity and alluring more people to taste.

There are eight flavors you could choose from; milk, chocolate, mint chocolate, yogurt, coffee, matcha, red bean and taro. Each flavor has its own advocators; it is really hard to judge which one is the best. But the best-selling in the store is milk. The famous delicacy blog “Bajenny http://www.wretch.cc/blog/bajenny”also said the flavor is fragrant. The owner of the blog also interviewed the owner, the owner announce that they utilize the best quality of milk to manufacture each puff. The owner leak the tip for tasting: before you ready to savor the puff, you have better wait for a while until the ice cream becomes a little bit of softness. So that when you bite into as soon as the ice cream touches your tip of tongue, you will identify with what the value of the price is.

Because of the blog, there are more and more people knowing the extraordinary. In PTT(the biggest BBS in Taiwan), “buytogether” board, buying Eva Puff is regarded as the fashion. The enhancing charm of the puff is really amazing, therefore, if you go to Tainan, there is another option for you aside from Tan Tzi noodle or other appetizer you are familiar with.

The Organizer of Olivia's

[2009/03/25 0:11] Cloud Clarity: http://weiarethenews.blogspot.com/
[2009/03/25 0:11] Nada Copperfield: reviwer
[2009/03/25 0:11] karikan Kytori: ok
[2009/03/25 0:11] Nada Copperfield: stoyr go
[2009/03/25 0:11] Cloud Clarity: my story is about
[2009/03/25 0:11] Cloud Clarity: a restaurant
[2009/03/25 0:12] Cloud Clarity: at the foothill of 大坑 inTaicung
[2009/03/25 0:12] Cloud Clarity: it's a famous restaurant for its bamboo design
[2009/03/25 0:12] Cloud Clarity: and it's bamboo rice
[2009/03/25 0:13] Cloud Clarity: u can take home the bamboo after eating the bamboo rice
[2009/03/25 0:13] Cloud Clarity: and it also has lots of delicious bamboo cuisines there
[2009/03/25 0:14] Cloud Clarity: but they also have cuisines without bamboo
[2009/03/25 0:14] Jackowacko Juliesse: uh huh
[2009/03/25 0:14] Cloud Clarity: like 紅燒軟骨肉
[2009/03/25 0:15] Cloud Clarity: it's the most famous for the restaurant
[2009/03/25 0:15] Cloud Clarity: let's it= =
[2009/03/25 0:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: hu
[2009/03/25 0:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: uh
[2009/03/25 0:15] Cloud Clarity: i don't have a complete structure this time= =
[2009/03/25 0:15] Jackowacko Juliesse: because of amie??
[2009/03/25 0:16] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 0:16] Cloud Clarity: cuz i have no idea how to organize this topic
[2009/03/25 0:16] Cloud Clarity: not really ==
[2009/03/25 0:16] Cloud Clarity: it's because i don't know what to focus
[2009/03/25 0:16] karikan Kytori: what's the difference between steamed rice and the rice we eat every day?
[2009/03/25 0:16] Cloud Clarity: i went to the restaurant and it is really unique
[2009/03/25 0:16] Cloud Clarity: but lack of concentration
[2009/03/25 0:17] Cloud Clarity: since it has a varitiess of food besides cuisines cooked with bamboo
[2009/03/25 0:17] Cloud Clarity: what can i do~~~~~~~~`
[2009/03/25 0:18] Cloud Clarity: what do u think~reviwer??
[2009/03/25 0:18] Cloud Clarity: ohoh
[2009/03/25 0:18] karikan Kytori: u ignore my question
[2009/03/25 0:18] karikan Kytori: = =
[2009/03/25 0:19] Jackowacko Juliesse: she is princess
[2009/03/25 0:19] Cloud Clarity: steamed rice with "bamboo"
[2009/03/25 0:19] Jackowacko Juliesse: she can ignore every one
[2009/03/25 0:19] Cloud Clarity: QQ
[2009/03/25 0:19] Cloud Clarity: Q_____________________Q
[2009/03/25 0:19] Cloud Clarity: the steamed rice with bamboo smells good= =
[2009/03/25 0:19] Cloud Clarity: and taste different= =
[2009/03/25 0:20] Jackowacko Juliesse: only the smelling?
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: taste different
[2009/03/25 0:20] Nada Copperfield: princess is depressed now
[2009/03/25 0:20] Nada Copperfield: don't push her
[2009/03/25 0:20] Nada Copperfield: muahuau
[2009/03/25 0:20] karikan Kytori: maybe u could describe that in ur story
[2009/03/25 0:20] Jackowacko Juliesse: hahah
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: how~~~~~~~~
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: i tried@@
[2009/03/25 0:20] Nada Copperfield: she's crying now = =
[2009/03/25 0:20] Jackowacko Juliesse: i m sorry
[2009/03/25 0:20] Nada Copperfield: takt it easy pal~
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: = =
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: = =
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: = =
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: = =
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: = =
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: ==
[2009/03/25 0:20] Cloud Clarity: = =
[2009/03/25 0:20] karikan Kytori: crying!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[2009/03/25 0:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: oh~~~~~
[2009/03/25 0:21] Cloud Clarity: I DIDN'T
[2009/03/25 0:21] karikan Kytori: one is crying, the other is burning
[2009/03/25 0:21] Cloud Clarity: I AM NOT
[2009/03/25 0:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: sorry
[2009/03/25 0:21] Nada Copperfield: almost= =
[2009/03/25 0:21] karikan Kytori: what a great contrast
[2009/03/25 0:21] Nada Copperfield: what's the difference = =
[2009/03/25 0:21] Nada Copperfield: = =
[2009/03/25 0:21] Jackowacko Juliesse: lol
[2009/03/25 0:21] Nada Copperfield: iamnot~
[2009/03/25 0:21] Cloud Clarity: muahahhahahaha
[2009/03/25 0:21] Cloud Clarity: have u ever eaten bamboo rice?
[2009/03/25 0:22] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/25 0:22] Cloud Clarity: i just don't know how to describe how it taste
[2009/03/25 0:23] karikan Kytori: i mean the rice we eat every day is steamed by the electronic steamer
[2009/03/25 0:23] karikan Kytori: in a way, rice is all steamed
[2009/03/25 0:23] Cloud Clarity: oh~
[2009/03/25 0:23] Cloud Clarity: ummmmmmmm
[2009/03/25 0:23] karikan Kytori: maybe u could emphasise the difference
[2009/03/25 0:23] Jackowacko Juliesse: uh huh
[2009/03/25 0:24] Cloud Clarity: @@
[2009/03/25 0:24] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2009/03/25 0:24] Cloud Clarity: i see
[2009/03/25 0:24] Nada Copperfield: @###$$^$#^@
[2009/03/25 0:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: the reviewer?
[2009/03/25 0:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: do u have any comment?
[2009/03/25 0:25] Cloud Clarity: what's the focus of my topic?@@ do u guys has any ideas?
[2009/03/25 0:25] karikan Kytori: i'm the reviewer, right?
[2009/03/25 0:25] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/25 0:25] Jackowacko Juliesse: haha
[2009/03/25 0:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: editor?
[2009/03/25 0:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: sotrry
[2009/03/25 0:26] Jackowacko Juliesse: sorry
[2009/03/25 0:26] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/25 0:26] Nada Copperfield: you are the reviewer
[2009/03/25 0:26] Nada Copperfield: i am the evaluator muahuahau
[2009/03/25 0:26] Nada Copperfield: and iam still reading her story
[2009/03/25 0:27] Nada Copperfield: and thinking the questipon
[2009/03/25 0:27] Cloud Clarity: and i devided my article into small topics...
[2009/03/25 0:27] Second Life: Your object 'Object' has been returned to your inventory lost and found folder by Reuters Maintenance from parcel 'Top News - Reuters discussion area' at Thomson Reuters 172, 99 due to parcel auto return.
[2009/03/25 0:28] Cloud Clarity: 蓬萊米
[2009/03/25 0:28] Cloud Clarity: wait
[2009/03/25 0:28] Nada Copperfield: hey
[2009/03/25 0:28] Nada Copperfield: i am wondering that
[2009/03/25 0:28] Nada Copperfield: is that the steamed rice bamboo differetn from the white rice????
[2009/03/25 0:29] Jackowacko Juliesse: emma= =
[2009/03/25 0:29] Cloud Clarity: in this restaurant it uses 蓬萊米
[2009/03/25 0:29] Cloud Clarity: emma@@
[2009/03/25 0:29] Nada Copperfield: ii see
[2009/03/25 0:29] Mi Shinn: hello
[2009/03/25 0:29] Cloud Clarity: hello~i thought u are busy right now~haha
[2009/03/25 0:30] Cloud Clarity: hey~
[2009/03/25 0:30] karikan Kytori: hi
[2009/03/25 0:30] Nada Copperfield: okay i see haha
[2009/03/25 0:31] karikan Kytori: i think if u devide ur focus into two kinds
[2009/03/25 0:32] Cloud Clarity: umum
[2009/03/25 0:32] Cloud Clarity: what kinds?
[2009/03/25 0:32] karikan Kytori: maybe u could tell us why u choose these two
[2009/03/25 0:32] karikan Kytori: rice and ribs
[2009/03/25 0:32] Cloud Clarity: oh
[2009/03/25 0:32] karikan Kytori: coz u said there r many dishes there
[2009/03/25 0:32] karikan Kytori: why u chose these two
[2009/03/25 0:32] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/25 0:32] Cloud Clarity: these two are the most famous
[2009/03/25 0:33] karikan Kytori: ok i c
[2009/03/25 0:33] Nada Copperfield: oh~got it
[2009/03/25 0:33] karikan Kytori: would it be ok if u add that into ur story?
[2009/03/25 0:33] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2009/03/25 0:33] karikan Kytori: i mean these two are most famous
[2009/03/25 0:33] karikan Kytori: so u wrote about them
[2009/03/25 0:34] Cloud Clarity: and if i add one more kind?
[2009/03/25 0:34] Cloud Clarity: cuz they have different vagatables or new dishes in different seasons
[2009/03/25 0:35] Cloud Clarity: but i don't know if i should add that
[2009/03/25 0:35] Cloud Clarity: it sounds like advertising@@
[2009/03/25 0:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: i think it is not necessary
[2009/03/25 0:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: it's my opnion
[2009/03/25 0:35] Jackowacko Juliesse: :)
[2009/03/25 0:35] Nada Copperfield: qhy
[2009/03/25 0:35] Nada Copperfield: why you can explain
[2009/03/25 0:35] Nada Copperfield: let's discuss
[2009/03/25 0:36] Cloud Clarity: u mean add a topic of the dishes in different seasons is not necessary?
[2009/03/25 0:36] Jackowacko Juliesse: yep
[2009/03/25 0:36] Jackowacko Juliesse: it is the news
[2009/03/25 0:37] Cloud Clarity: so...?
[2009/03/25 0:37] Jackowacko Juliesse: u can report they will be different vegetable in each season
[2009/03/25 0:38] Jackowacko Juliesse: but there is no need to repot too detail
[2009/03/25 0:38] Cloud Clarity: oh~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[2009/03/25 0:38] Cloud Clarity: ok
[2009/03/25 0:38] Cloud Clarity: i see
[2009/03/25 0:39] Jackowacko Juliesse: finish?
[2009/03/25 0:39] Nada Copperfield: okay then
[2009/03/25 0:39] Jackowacko Juliesse: next turn?
[2009/03/25 0:39] Nada Copperfield: let me ecluate
[2009/03/25 0:39] karikan Kytori: i think her end is quite abrupt
[2009/03/25 0:39] Nada Copperfield: cloudy
[2009/03/25 0:39] karikan Kytori: son't u think so?
[2009/03/25 0:39] Cloud Clarity: yeah
[2009/03/25 0:39] Nada Copperfield: ja
[2009/03/25 0:39] Cloud Clarity: cuz i don't know how to end this time
[2009/03/25 0:39] karikan Kytori: there should be a conclusion
[2009/03/25 0:39] karikan Kytori: ok, maybe we should figure that out
[2009/03/25 0:39] Cloud Clarity: i have no idea how to invite people to this restaurant
[2009/03/25 0:40] karikan Kytori: is the restaurant in the suburb?
[2009/03/25 0:41] Cloud Clarity: (whenever i think of "writing like advertisement" and i blank)
[2009/03/25 0:41] Cloud Clarity: oh yes
[2009/03/25 0:41] Cloud Clarity: at the foothill of the mountain... in the subuerb
[2009/03/25 0:41] Nada Copperfield: evluate: could your story has no big problem but you should give us the detailed difference of the daily rice and mamboo steam rice; and also the ending is uprup; but basically this story is no big problem
[2009/03/25 0:42] karikan Kytori: i could understand what u worry about "ad"
[2009/03/25 0:42] Nada Copperfield: any problem to addto ????
[2009/03/25 0:42] karikan Kytori: coz i wrote about a restaurant this time
[2009/03/25 0:42] karikan Kytori: i worry about that too
[2009/03/25 0:42] Cloud Clarity: 一＂一　see, u know what i mean
[2009/03/25 0:42] Cloud Clarity: ohoh
[2009/03/25 0:42] Cloud Clarity: haha
[2009/03/25 0:42] Jackowacko Juliesse: uh huh
[2009/03/25 0:42] Cloud Clarity: so next one
[2009/03/25 0:42] Cloud Clarity: hahahhaah
[2009/03/25 0:42] Nada Copperfield: okay then one more basically this story is not ad at all,
[2009/03/25 0:43] Cloud Clarity: thx
[2009/03/25 0:43] Cloud Clarity: so much
[2009/03/25 0:43] Nada Copperfield: okay finish??
[2009/03/25 0:43] Cloud Clarity: XDDDDDDDDD

Through the discussion, we conclude some problem with Olivia’s news. Meanwhile, we provided some comment so that Olivia could revise the news. The news is reporting about the tourist attraction “Takeng”. Takeng is famous for its prosperity of bamboo. There is a special food called Bamboo rice. Olive introduces the cuisine basically, however, we all think that she could portray the distinction between the rice we cook with the electronic steamer at home and the rice she presented. Moreover, we suggest that she describe the savor of bamboo rice deeply. In her paragraph, she only depicts how the container looks like.

In last paragraph, Olivia made the same mistake which she made last article. The ending is too abrupt. It did not have the completed structure and the sentence is also fractal. Maybe she can utilize some transition so as to compose the entire paragraph.

In conclusion, we all have the opinion that there is not any big problem of the news. If only she revise the problem and nuance mistake.

What's in the Puff?!

The softness in the Puff, you cannot miss it!!

BY JASON HUANG

‘Ice cream in the puff?’ Can you imagine the stuff in the puff? In the ancient city Tainan, there is innovative dessert you might have never seen in Taiwan. Eva Puff, at the beginning, it located near NCKU and it was popular with the students and the inhabitants. Two years ago, Eva Puff moved to Tainan Girls’ Senior High School, nevertheless, it did not affect its popularity and alluring more people to taste.

There are eight flavors you could choose from; milk, chocolate, mint chocolate, yogurt, coffee, matcha, red bean and taro. Each flavor has its own advocators; it is really hard to judge which one is the best. But the best-selling in the store is milk. Based on the article on the blog, the blogger said the flavor is fragrant. But before you ready to savor the puff, you should wait for a while until the ice cream becomes a little bit of softness. When you bite as soon as the ice cream touches your tip of tongue, you will identify with what the value of the price is.

Because of the blog, there are more and more people knowing the extraordinary. In PTT(the biggest BBS in Taiwan), “buytogether” board, buying Eva Puff is regarded as the fashion. The enhancing charm of the puff is really amazing, therefore, if you go to Tainan, there is another option for you aside from Tan Tzi noodle or other appetizer you are familiar with.

(Revised)The Glamour of Pudding

Have you ever gone to Tainan? Do you know the cuisine of City “Tainan” have the renowned pudding? Tainan is not only famous for its Tan Tzai Noodle and shrimp roll but also has the dessert that you can eat after the meal. The Elate Pudding only sold on the internet at the beginning; however, it opened the first store near Tainan Canal. Every time when you pass by the store, you can discover there is always many people lining up in order to buy the pudding. What is the glamour of the pudding sold in Tainan? What is the difference between the puddings you can buy in the convenience store?

According to the gormandizer’s saying, the flavor of the pudding is really fragrant and thick. At the first spoon, you could understand why it could result in the blast on the internet. Moreover, there is not only one flavor you could choose from. There are also sesame, mango and cocoa that you have not seen before in the convenience store. The owner of “Elate pudding” Mr. Chu said, the pudding was made for his daughter when his daughter was preparing for the JCEE. After his daughter tasted the pudding, his daughter was amazed at the culinary art of his father. Mr. Chu only made with the milk and sugar without any water. At the same time, she was charmed by the pudding. And it also give Mr. Chu an idea that he could try to sell on the Internet. after he made it into practice, it sold out soon in a short time. Even though the price is higher than the one you could buy everywhere. Based on the point, you could imagine how mesmerizing the Elate pudding is. For Mr. Chu, it is the implication that he shall produce massively.

Now, we are free from waiting and buying from the store directly. So that next time when you go to Tainan, you must arrange the schedule to taste the magic dessert.

Be The Organizer of Nada's News

writer: Nada Copperfield(Dana)
reviewer: Cloud Clarity(Olivia)
editor:karikan Kytori(Alan)
organizer:Jackowacko Juliesse(Jason)

[2009/03/11 6:46] Nada Copperfield: i am writing about what food that you never missed and would would never miss in dan shui
[2009/03/11 6:46] Jackowacko Juliesse: uh huh
[2009/03/11 6:46] Nada Copperfield: first i am talking aoubt what would you think of when tallking aoubt danshui
[2009/03/11 6:47] Nada Copperfield: then i brifiely those foods
[2009/03/11 6:47] Nada Copperfield: but what are the really and most representative stores
[2009/03/11 6:47] Nada Copperfield: i tell the readers........
[2009/03/11 6:47] Jackowacko Juliesse: end?
[2009/03/11 6:47] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/11 6:48] Jackowacko Juliesse: is that woman also one of our classmate?
[2009/03/11 6:48] Say Kelberry: ?
[2009/03/11 6:48] Nada Copperfield: step by step one by one i took the reader walkin around the route of dan shui cuisine trip
[2009/03/11 6:49] Nada Copperfield: is that OK!!!!!!!!!
[2009/03/11 6:49] Jackowacko Juliesse: okay
[2009/03/11 6:49] Say Kelberry: Let's go
[2009/03/11 6:49] Jackowacko Juliesse: could i say the opinion?
[2009/03/11 6:49] Nada Copperfield: JUST SAY IT
[2009/03/11 6:50] Jackowacko Juliesse: i think you mention too many cuisines in the short article
[2009/03/11 6:50] Nada Copperfield: BUT
[2009/03/11 6:50] Nada Copperfield: YOU HAVE TO KNOWTHAT MY TOPIC IS CUISINES THAT YOU SHOULD NEVER MISSED IN DANSHUI
[2009/03/11 6:51] Nada Copperfield: THERE CAN NOT BE JUST ONE FOOD THAT YOU CAN EAT IN DANSHUI
[2009/03/11 6:52] Jackowacko Juliesse: hmm
[2009/03/11 6:53] Cloud Clarity: hey~so an idea~listen to this(a little crazy)
[2009/03/11 6:53] Cloud Clarity: after i read ur news
[2009/03/11 6:53] Cloud Clarity: i feel like perhaps u can offer readers a map~
[2009/03/11 6:53] Cloud Clarity: (just a idea)
[2009/03/11 6:54] Cloud Clarity: and
[2009/03/11 6:54] Cloud Clarity: somehow
[2009/03/11 6:54] Cloud Clarity: i didn't feel like there is an ending?
[2009/03/11 6:54] Cloud Clarity: (or maybe it needs no ending?)
[2009/03/11 6:54] You can't create trees and grass on land you don't own
[2009/03/11 6:54] Cloud Clarity: i don't know
[2009/03/11 6:54] Nada Copperfield: ENDING.......yes indeed
[2009/03/11 6:54] Nada Copperfield: i don;t have any spefic ending
[2009/03/11 6:55] Nada Copperfield: that;s truth
[2009/03/11 6:55] karikan Kytori: i think ur work is like a travel piece, which is quite good
[2009/03/11 6:55] karikan Kytori: but some of the words r really hard for me
[2009/03/11 6:55] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 6:55] karikan Kytori: is it bcoz u take GRE?
[2009/03/11 6:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: and some words u did not type completedly
[2009/03/11 6:56] Cloud Clarity: no i don't think so= =?? like whar?
[2009/03/11 6:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: waling
[2009/03/11 6:56] Nada Copperfield: my typo
[2009/03/11 6:56] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/03/11 6:56] Nada Copperfield: sorry
[2009/03/11 6:56] karikan Kytori: i couldn't find that word
[2009/03/11 6:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: maybe u forget the "k"
[2009/03/11 6:56] Jackowacko Juliesse: i though it is a new word for me
[2009/03/11 6:57] Cloud Clarity: ok there is misspelling but i guess that is normal?(i have mispellings too)
[2009/03/11 6:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: me, too, though
[2009/03/11 6:57] Jackowacko Juliesse: there is no big problem in ur news, i think
[2009/03/11 6:58] Cloud Clarity: i thought that was walking? do u guys think so?
[2009/03/11 6:58] Jackowacko Juliesse: maybe
[2009/03/11 6:58] Jackowacko Juliesse: so we start to be the next one?
[2009/03/11 6:59] Cloud Clarity: haha so what's the big problem u say?
[2009/03/11 6:59] Jackowacko Juliesse: there is no big problem, maybe i just missing some words
[2009/03/11 6:59] Jackowacko Juliesse: sry
[2009/03/11 7:00] Cloud Clarity: what do u think, alan?
[2009/03/11 7:00] karikan Kytori: i think so too
[2009/03/11 7:00] Cloud Clarity: u r editor~
[2009/03/11 7:00] karikan Kytori: but i think
[2009/03/11 7:00] Cloud Clarity: evauluate~XDDD
[2009/03/11 7:01] karikan Kytori: maybe u should have another title
[2009/03/11 7:01] karikan Kytori: i don't think the title is strong enoygh
[2009/03/11 7:01] Nada Copperfield: such as>>>
[2009/03/11 7:01] karikan Kytori: no idea now
[2009/03/11 7:01] Nada Copperfield: ok
[2009/03/11 7:01] karikan Kytori: i just think it's too general
[2009/03/11 7:01] Nada Copperfield: i'lltkinkaotherone
[2009/03/11 7:02] karikan Kytori: if other guys think it's fine
[2009/03/11 7:02] Nada Copperfield: ya that is a littel bit general iundeed
[2009/03/11 7:02] karikan Kytori: u don't have to change
[2009/03/11 7:02] karikan Kytori: just my idea
[2009/03/11 7:02] Nada Copperfield: it;s ok i'll change it
[2009/03/11 7:02] Nada Copperfield: muahahahah
[2009/03/11 7:02] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 7:03] Cloud Clarity: HAHA~i only vote for a map
[2009/03/11 7:03] Nada Copperfield: MAP
[2009/03/11 7:03] Nada Copperfield: I'LL TRY IT = =
[2009/03/11 7:03] karikan Kytori: but i think the map would cost her too much time
[2009/03/11 7:03] Nada Copperfield: DANKE
[2009/03/11 7:03] Cloud Clarity: cuz the name just don't really show people about those cusines at once
[2009/03/11 7:03] karikan Kytori: it's not that easy to make one
[2009/03/11 7:03] Cloud Clarity: ohoh
[2009/03/11 7:04] Cloud Clarity: then think of a more striking name lol
[2009/03/11 7:04] Nada Copperfield: ja
[2009/03/11 7:04] Cloud Clarity: may i ask a question?
[2009/03/11 7:04] Nada Copperfield: go ahead
[2009/03/11 7:04] karikan Kytori: soryy, i have an extremely urgent natural call now
[2009/03/11 7:04] Cloud Clarity: what's the time in ur communication?
[2009/03/11 7:04] karikan Kytori: away a minute
[2009/03/11 7:04] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 7:05] Cloud Clarity: mine is 7:04?
[2009/03/11 7:05] Nada Copperfield: it's ok
[2009/03/11 7:05] Cloud Clarity: what aabout urs?
[2009/03/11 7:05] Nada Copperfield: mine is dunno
[2009/03/11 7:05] Nada Copperfield: almost the same
[2009/03/11 7:05] Nada Copperfield: i think it's the sl time
[2009/03/11 7:05] Cloud Clarity: alright
[2009/03/11 7:06] Cloud Clarity: if it's SL's time~then emma will accept it
[2009/03/11 7:06] Cloud Clarity: so all in all
[2009/03/11 7:06] Cloud Clarity: dana's news need an ending and new title?
[2009/03/11 7:07] Cloud Clarity: and perhaps check the spellings
[2009/03/11 7:07] Nada Copperfield: could sb tell me about hte ending
[2009/03/11 7:07] Nada Copperfield: i don't quite get it
[2009/03/11 7:07] Cloud Clarity: i duuno, my feeling is that
[2009/03/11 7:08] Cloud Clarity: she get a quite elaborated beginning
[2009/03/11 7:08] Nada Copperfield: is that i shold make an brief ending???????????????????????????????
[2009/03/11 7:08] Cloud Clarity: but suddenly stop
[2009/03/11 7:08] Nada Copperfield: yeah
[2009/03/11 7:08] Nada Copperfield: alrigh ,,i think i'll try to have an ending
[2009/03/11 7:08] Cloud Clarity: i got this kind of feeling
[2009/03/11 7:08] Cloud Clarity: how about u guys think?
[2009/03/11 7:08] Nada Copperfield: then
[2009/03/11 7:09] Nada Copperfield: ending and title and typo
[2009/03/11 7:09] Nada Copperfield: ok
[2009/03/11 7:09] Cloud Clarity: r u guys all have ergent natural calls? lol
[2009/03/11 7:10] karikan Kytori: back
[2009/03/11 7:10] Nada Copperfield: what's going on now
[2009/03/11 7:10] karikan Kytori: reading ur chat log now
[2009/03/11 7:10] karikan Kytori: ha ha
[2009/03/11 7:11] Nada Copperfield: alright
[2009/03/11 7:11] karikan Kytori: where's jason?
[2009/03/11 7:11] Cloud Clarity: i dnno
[2009/03/11 7:11] Cloud Clarity: jason??
[2009/03/11 7:11] Nada Copperfield: should we move on or somehting
[2009/03/11 7:11] Cloud Clarity: where r u~????????
[2009/03/11 7:11] Nada Copperfield: who's the organizer????
[2009/03/11 7:11] karikan Kytori: wait
[2009/03/11 7:12] karikan Kytori: in one of ur sentences
[2009/03/11 7:12] Cloud Clarity: ok alan plz tell us ur opinions about ending
[2009/03/11 7:12] Jackowacko Juliesse: yes
[2009/03/11 7:12] karikan Kytori: i think it's a bit of redundant
[2009/03/11 7:12] Nada Copperfield: ok
[2009/03/11 7:12] Nada Copperfield: yes
[2009/03/11 7:12] karikan Kytori: juicy or succulent
[2009/03/11 7:12] Nada Copperfield: ok
[2009/03/11 7:12] Cloud Clarity: jason what do u think about her "no ending?"
[2009/03/11 7:12] Nada Copperfield: mauhmauahauahuaha
[2009/03/11 7:12] karikan Kytori: it's mean the same thing
[2009/03/11 7:12] karikan Kytori: so just choose one
[2009/03/11 7:12] Nada Copperfield: muahauahauhaua
[2009/03/11 7:12] Nada Copperfield: ok
[2009/03/11 7:13] Nada Copperfield: i'lldelete one owrld
[2009/03/11 7:13] Nada Copperfield: wrod
[2009/03/11 7:13] Nada Copperfield: word
[2009/03/11 7:13] Nada Copperfield: shi8
[2009/03/11 7:14] Jackowacko Juliesse: maybe just the specific ending
[2009/03/11 7:14] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/03/11 7:14] Jackowacko Juliesse: like cloud said
[2009/03/11 7:14] Nada Copperfield: JA
[2009/03/11 7:14] Cloud Clarity: alan u thinkg so? or there is no need for ending?
[2009/03/11 7:14] Nada Copperfield: I'll have one
[2009/03/11 7:15] karikan Kytori: so u mean she does not need to mention the slope part?
[2009/03/11 7:15] Nada Copperfield: no
[2009/03/11 7:15] Nada Copperfield: what she mean is i have ot have an ending
[2009/03/11 7:16] karikan Kytori: o i c
[2009/03/11 7:16] Nada Copperfield: o u c
[2009/03/11 7:16] Nada Copperfield: wow goood and simple and easy word
[2009/03/11 7:16] karikan Kytori: but i think that needs maybe just 2 lines to achieve it
[2009/03/11 7:16] Cloud Clarity: let's fine
[2009/03/11 7:16] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/03/11 7:16] karikan Kytori: as what i kust said
[2009/03/11 7:17] Cloud Clarity: that's fine
[2009/03/11 7:17] Nada Copperfield: that
[2009/03/11 7:17] Nada Copperfield: is
[2009/03/11 7:17] karikan Kytori: i look ur work as a walk through the street
[2009/03/11 7:17] karikan Kytori: and i thibnk the slope part is fine
[2009/03/11 7:17] Cloud Clarity: so do i
[2009/03/11 7:17] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/03/11 7:17] karikan Kytori: just a bit of abrupt at the end
[2009/03/11 7:17] Cloud Clarity: but she elaborated the beginning
[2009/03/11 7:17] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/03/11 7:18] Cloud Clarity: yeah that's how i feel alan
[2009/03/11 7:18] karikan Kytori: maybe u should mention a bit more about the food again
[2009/03/11 7:18] karikan Kytori: just 2-3 lines would be enough i think
[2009/03/11 7:18] Nada Copperfield: oh youmean the ending
[2009/03/11 7:18] Nada Copperfield: ?
[2009/03/11 7:18] karikan Kytori: yep
[2009/03/11 7:18] Nada Copperfield: okay
[2009/03/11 7:18] Nada Copperfield: i got it
[2009/03/11 7:18] karikan Kytori: draw it back to food
[2009/03/11 7:18] Nada Copperfield: muahauahua
[2009/03/11 7:18] karikan Kytori: do not end at the slope
[2009/03/11 7:18] Nada Copperfield: alright

According to the transcript, Alan and Olivia think Dana’s news is lack of the complete ending. The end is abrupt; meanwhile, some words are redundant. For example, “The juicy or succulent of the substantial fish was wrapped up by the crispy skin.” Alan pointed out that the “juicy” and “succulent” have the same meaning. And he advises that Dana could cross out from one of both. The most important problem of her news is the incomplete ending. Especially the part of slope, both of them deem Dana should integrate the ending.

Olivia also suggests Dana can draw the map of the cuisine she report, it will help the readers to find the store. Besides, Olivia found the title of the news is too universal, and the title can not strike us, either.

Eventually, there is the last but not the least, there are some words miss-spelling. This problem may result in some blocks when we read.

The Glamour of Elate Pudding

Have you ever gone to Tainan? Do you know the cuisine of City “Tainan” have the renowned pudding? Tainan is not only famous for its Tan Tzai Noodle and shrimp roll but also has the dessert that you can eat after the meal. The Elate Pudding only sold on the internet at the beginning; however, it opened the first store near Tainan Canal. Every time when you pass by the store, you can discover there is always many people lining up in order to buy the pudding. What is the glamour of the pudding sold in Tainan? What is the difference between the puddings you can buy in the convenience store?
According to the gormandizer’s saying, the favor of the pudding is really fragrant and thick. At the first spoon, you could understand why it could result in the blast on the internet. The owner of “Elate pudding” Mr. Chu said, the pudding was made for his daughter when his daughter was preparing for the JCEE. After his daughter tasted the pudding which Mr. Chu made himself, his daughter was amazed at the culinary art of his father. At the same time, she was fascinated by the pudding. Mr. Chu tried to sell on the Internet. But it sold out soon in a short time. Mr. Chu considered that he needs to produce massively.
Now, we are free from waiting and buying from the store directly. So that next time when you go to Tainan, you must arrange the schedule to taste the magic dessert.